LadyLazarus

Yes, things pan out differently in this story than in the books, that's why it's called fanfiction. Also, it's Alternative Universe, otherwise abbreviated as AU, but I can see how ...

Thanks for reading, and I understand your points. I agree about punctuation, which I will remedy. However, I disagree with about your suggestions about structure and scattered thoughts. Confessional p

Thank you for reading, and your imput is appreciated even if you aren't a master at poetry. Readers of poetry are influential, too. :)

Thanks for the review. I understand what you mean by punctuation. I'm usually loathe to use period in poetry because they have a certain finality I find only useful in ...

Thanks so much! I'm flattered. I'm grateful you appreciate the style. I think a lot of people are put off by the randomness, the lack of structure, but when I'm ...