LadyFreeWill

Well, it seemed poetic enough for me. I liked it. The narrator was having some girl/boy (most likely boy) troubles, huh? or maybe ex B/GF problems? :)

I'm with Lena on the too-much-characters part. Even though your grammar and spelling was perfectly fine, I got confused by all of the characters. I had no clue what was ...

I liked the meaning of this poem, but the rhythmic flow wasn't very good. It was pretty good, I guess, if you thought it up during history. Usually that class ...

Oh, yeah sooooo believable. Do it with a guy you just met. *Right*.

Hm... I thought this story was pretty good. Things happened a little quickly at the end, but it was good to see that there was a *happy* ending. Good job!

Yes, I think we all know that guy. Him , that is. Well written, Elizabeth! You wrote this story with a lot of sincerety!

Hm... I wonder how old Andres is, if he thinks the main character is really young. Anyway, I really liked this story; it was short, and it was very sweet. ...

This was mildly amusing for me. I agree with Death on number one. 'Specially about the last part!

This was a really good story! It kept me wanting to keep reading until the end, but I must admit I'm a bit confused. Did Stephen die? I think he ...

So... she died? Sorry, I'm in a hurry so I was only able to scan through the story. But what I did read, I thought was pretty good.