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Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 3
HI Honny, let's just jump into this, no introductions needed! The nearing thunder rumbled in a low, gutteral growl as the wind picked up, taking the sails in its wings. ...
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Prologue)
Hello, Grav, I'm here to start reviewing your work ^^ I know you gave me it a few weeks ago, but I wanted to wait for Team Tortoise to start. ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 2
Hello Honny! I hope you forgive me but today's review is just gonna be an overall and a few tips. Let's begin! I know what you said about the paragraphs, ...
Jun 2, 2020 -
Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 1
Hello, Honny, you're awaited review! Let's just get started! I watched as a man and cart on the path made its' way to the cabin I stood beside. I smiled ...
May 27, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 15]
Here I am, let’s just get started! The next morning, Zoya woke up with a start. She’d just had a very vivid dream but now she couldn’t remember any of ...
May 27, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 14]
Hello Libs, today’s review is my commentary and a bunch of advice you’re stuck with. Let’s just get into it :) King Akolxohez was sitting in his room, in the ...
May 16, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 13]
Hi Libs, me here to annoy you with notifs and puns and such. Since I cannot sleep, I shall get to this review because I apparently don't care enough to ...
May 10, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 12]
Hi Liberty! It’s Jade and I’m so excited to re view the last piece you have written t o date. If you can’t tell, I’m getting insa nely bored to ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 11]
Haha, I'm almost caught up... Haha, I'm almost sad about that now, well, let's go. Also, my last review for you was over 3,000, so I may try to top ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 10]
Hey, it's your friendly neighborhood Jade here with another review. I took a break 'cause I was getting burnt out, but I'm back now! So, let's get started :) A ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 9]
Liberty! After a long break of a few hours, I'm back to finally finish this series so far =D. I'm pretty excited because this is the review that is going ...
Apr 30, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 6]
Hey, it's Jade, and I'm two reviews away from my next star. Eeek! I'm really starting to enjoy writing these for you, it's really just me talking, almost to myself ...
Apr 29, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 8]
You know the drill, a gem stone here to give her useless thoughts on your novel *Jazz hands* who were walking about. Who is unneeded, were walking about is better ...
Apr 29, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 7]
Wesh, Libby! I'm back at it, ready to read some more. I noticed there is no 6, and I searched your portfolio, but couldn't find it. Is it a mistake ...
Apr 29, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 5]
Hiya Libs, long time no chat :P! I gave myself a lecture on puns and how it scares off people, I'm 5 reviews away from my next star, and I ...
Apr 29, 2020
