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Re: Marcia and Me: Chapter Two
Yes please
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Re: Atlas ch1
This is amazing, just amazing. Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more on your work! You want it? Come and get it. Oliverduckedbehi theteacher’sdesk and Atlas ...
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Re: Prolouge
"Prolouge 80 years ago I wasn’t someone Known to man, I wasn't someone to be remembered, I was a normal kid with a poor life, no one to call family, ...
May 14, 2018 - Re: Prolouge May 14, 2018
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Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 9
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May 11, 2018
Congratulations! You’re not perfect! It’s ridiculous to want to be perfect anyway. But then, everybody’s ridiculous sometimes, except perfect people. You know what perfect is? Perfect is not eat -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 8
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May 11, 2018
Congratulations! You’re not perfect! It’s ridiculous to want to be perfect anyway. But then, everybody’s ridiculous sometimes, except perfect people. You know what perfect is? Perfect is not eat -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 13
This is brillant, amazing, terrific. Any awesome word could describe this. I love the "Ho, sir," the man said. "Your purse looks mighty fat. Let me help you get it ...
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Amazing
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Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 14
This is an amazing it is so emotional, and amazing, just amazing. Its intense and professional. I love this and your writing. Keep writing. I loved how at the end ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: The Horsemen - Chapter 1
Hi Lady Astella here for a review. I love your grammer on how you wrote, it is very sophisticated. I also loved the intense emotion you put into your story, ...
May 9, 2018