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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Bitter Metamorphosis

    Pay no attention to that "Galerius" user... If you ask me one can critique but not be overly harsh, rude and mean... You really opened your heart to timely lessons ...

    Nov 1, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Bitter Metamorphosis

    I Loved this poem very moving and meaningful I loved the part about youth's sweater unravelling-unique and original metaphor. I really reaaly like you work. You should get publsihed!!! Fabulous ...

    Nov 1, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Bitter Metamorphosis

    Something for my Creative Writing personal portfolio project. Subject, Metamorphosis. Who were you in your youth? Who are you now? All in poem form. This is a sequel of sorts ...

    Oct 29, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Winter Road

    I like the flow of your poem. It doesn't sound forced and it feels natural. It's a really nice piece. You should keep up the good work! I have to ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Winter Road

    It was really nice and good. The words and the rhyming were awsome! I dont know if you have grammer mestakes but I couldnt fined them. Just to give you ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Winter Road

    Wonderfully written. It seemed a little off in one or two lines, like an extra syllable, but that could just be me. xD I have no idea who Robert Frost ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Winter Road

    Well first off you must do two reviews when submitting a piece, just thought I'd inform you since you haven't done any reviews. I really liked this it was full ...

    Oct 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Winter Road

    First of all, I'm not going to comment on a pen name. I prefer you keeping YOUR name. But, that's just me. :) Second of all, I really like this ...

    Oct 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Winter Road

    ~~~ E.C Branwen is a Pen Name that I am considering using. I dunno if it's good or not. I want my Pen Name to start with an E. and ...

    Oct 7, 2008


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