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The middle of two worlds lies in slumber now, But If my mind was to wander, which it eventually does- I find myself amongst those September days, waiting. I think ...

This was kind of cliche and a little simple, but I really liked it. It flowed nicely, and you could really feel the emotion behind it. As someone a few ...

Hmm... This was very well written, and it kept me interested the whole way (which is saying something for someone with the short attention span I have). I especially liked ...

Awesomely dark. This was very enjoyable to read and left me itrigued for part two. The beginning was a little overdone and confusing though...I prefer beginnings that don't beat around ...

Suzanne- Awesome. The style reminded me a lot of the book The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time by Mark Haddon, which is about a teenage boy with ...

VivelaMusique- Hellllo Maggie. Hehe. I've read this a couple of times before, but your writing never gets old. Especially when it's about Sirius Black. Hmm... Sirius Black has a choice ...

DoctorClicky - Ok, I'll start out with the nitpicky grammar stuff... I don’t know Mark. Put a comma after 'know' The committing the murder was the “rage and jealousy,” that’s ...

This was pretty good for a first post-poem-whatever-you-want-to-call-it. I could totally picture what you were describing, but I had one issue with didn't seem to start, and it didn't seem ...

No Mary, I haven't seen Matt's lyrics... The cool Matt or Notso? I can picture Notso writing emo lyrics...very easily actually. Cool Matt seems too happy though. And yeah, your ...

This is pretty good. Some parts of it were a litlte shaky, but I liked the zombie symbolism stuff. I also really liked the line about seeing only shades of ...

Hehe. Maggie, this is HILARIOUS!!!! I've actually been laughing out loud at this. And it's written really, really well. :D . Yey, this is my first post here. Woot!