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Re: Untitled
I really liked this story. :D It reminds me of how Victoria Alexander writes. Normally, switching back and forth between characters POV doesn't work, but you did an excellent job ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun
60, huh? Hope I can write like this when I'm that old. :D The sensory words are AMAZING!!! I like reading a story that makes you feel like you're expericencing ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 15
Gah, I loved this chapter! Like everyone else, I loved, "Watch out. I've got super powers too.'' :D It was real cute and kinda flirty for your character, which is ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Gage Jackson
Well, this was, um, unusual, to say the least. I liked it though. :D You write dialouge really well, which makes the story more intresting. What is Gage, exactly? How ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: AEOTS part1 the beginning ch1
This was a little unusual, but I liked it. You had a certain confidence about you when you would talk from your point of view, which was nice. How you ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Forever chapter 4
I really liked this chapter. :) It is a bit too much like Twilight, but by putting your own twist on it, the circumstances were both expected and unexpected, if ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)
I liked this chapter. :) I agree with Clup that the flashback was a good show of Rebecca's innocence, which was nice to see. Basically everyone can relate to this ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
I agree with KJ about the whole mind-pictures thing. And I really can't see Renesme saying yes, yes, yes....., but I really liked it. You really had me picturing everything; ...
Nov 23, 2008