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The edges of the tear hung down, frayed like cloth, swaying gently in the wind, and behind them, the sky seemed to bulge as if it were under some great ...

"Why?" He snorts, watching Johnny amuse himself, "It's not like the little retard even knows what I'm sayin'." He leans forwards, so close that Johnny can smell the cigarettes in ...

This is really smooth and serene. It got me calm, but i do agree with Carelessaussie13, maybe fell in is a little too much contrast with the tranquility of the ...

You know what i think, i told you when i saw you last and read it all! But i'm just posting because this story is really good! Plus it makes ...

ok here goes again: - I think this sounds a lot like a 'flashback' or a 'example?' i dont know how to explain what its like in my head, but ...

Man i know most of this has been said before (in a very precise fashion) but i'd just like to repeat, i suppose lol -I read the story after reading ...