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Re: I Hate Acrostic Poems (Winter)
This poem... wow, it's beautiful. You've probably heard it a few times already, but this describes Winter well. The stanzas per letter sound great. I apologise for the lack of ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Fade away
As FalingIntoAbyss said, there's a few mistakes. It made me stumble slightly reading it. "Sometimes I wish he's answer his phone." *He'd. He's would mean "he is/was". The ending was ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: An Alchemy Child: Chapter 1-3
Looks like a good story, I like it so far. Just a hint, try to space the chapters out. You'll want to post one chapter now and then. And a ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: A grandfathers tale, secrets of the long since buried.
Possibly the names? Aww, c'mon. You gotta tell us the names, Kam-kun. Soo... it looks like the grandfather has powers. Wow. I can't wait to see your next part. I ...
Oct 31, 2007 -
Re: The Beast Within
I really like the way you did this. It's really shows a picture. "Late at night it comes clawing at the door, human no more." It could be just me, ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: The Inspirational Courtyard
Hmm... well, I'm new to the reviewing thing but I'll give it a shot. Nice job on the poem, I like the content. The rythm is a bit off for ...
Oct 29, 2007