Kyuubi

This is going to be short because everyone caught the changes that need to be made. I liked the idea behind the story but I do have a problem with ...

Really, really, really long. But good anyway! :D I loved it! In my top 10, this is a 4. I can't really make any reviews on it though because of ...

Nice job with this chapter. I really enjoyed reading this. I did have a hard time finding the paragraph breaks though. I also find the wing designations a little funny. ...

This revised version was way better than the last one. I liked it a lot better. The added detail made it seem more believable. I actually had a good time ...

I liked this story a lot. I happened to like the way the conversations between the characters flow so easily. It was so natural. The descriptions were also good. I ...

Same here. There just wasn't enought character description to make it believable. I also think that there wasn't enough action for the characters in between dialogue and in the dialogue ...

I thought this one was better. Is this story Sophia's? It had better detail but it is still lacking in detail. Try describing the vampires a little more. Their individual ...

I have to agree with Jamie_rocks with the review. Those were exactly the same things I was going to say just not with Animorphs because I've nver read them. To ...

Nice job. I really enjoyed reading this story a lot. The thing I like most about the way you wrote this was how you described the personalities of a larger ...

This story is ranking up with some of my favorites as of right now. Nice work. However, I did notice some things. You seemed to have a problem with your ...

I like the flow the story gave. I found it easy to read and understand because of that. Although, I never understood why the character is so angry in the ...

I agree with all of the reviewers. It was slows in some places but then it would pick up again which made me keep reading. To put it simply, my ...

Amazing. Just amazing. Usually I'm not sentimental but this was possibly one of the best pieces I've read in a long time. I actually cried...a little :lol: That's pretty sad ...

I liked it. Good Story, plot, etc. However, I did not like the characters. When I was reading it, I didn't get a sense as to where or what they ...

This is going to sound harsh. This one was the not the best. I thought it could it have used more plot overview. Who was the "dark figure?" That said, ...