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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Alpha & Zee [Untitled] - Ch. 1

    I agree with the previous commenters (reviewers?). The 'main character' business makes things sound stilted an interrupts the fourth wall. I think "subject" or some other synonym might be more ...

    Mar 28, 2012


You cannot have an opponent if you keep saying yes.
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