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Re: Broomsticks: The Quidditch Tale
It's not a prose piece, the stanzas got mixed up when I uploaded it and I didn't know. I based the poem on my first Muggle Quidditch tournament that I ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Ocean Soul
Even just you describing the ocean was beautiful. And I could get behind more ocean metaphors :)
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Ocean Soul
That was really beautiful. The ocean and its mysteries also captivate me, but you made me think so much more about it. I would like to know more about if ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Mr. Homoh Hernaldez
It was really cleverly written, there are just some things that will help it come together better. 1) Give every character a name, it will help the actors feel more ...
May 5, 2014