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Re: Yellow
A/N: Haven't posted in this for a while, though I've been writing a ton of poetry. Here are a couple new poems. dad's toolshed the rats scramble under the pressboard ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
button-nosed I see her everywhere now – under the slate-sloped piano among the baby-footed pedals, laughing at me, her hands flying up like startled birds. she is wrapping herself up ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Hart green, unripe peaches bobbing like Adam's apples above him as he leads us to his front porch, smiling a crooked, sloping smile that cups over his false teeth, his ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Anubis
Thank you both for the critiques (and June, who critiqued this story while YWS was down)! Jiggity -- Yep, he's an old man, and I don't know why you thought ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
a night at britt gardens and as the evening spins, a party dress of nebula and solar wind, the violin bows sigh on their bed of strings, heaving up like ...
Aug 16, 2009 -
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hospice cold, unpitying sun, dropping in through the windowpanes sullen as a truant, cast-off and browsing. the light is unwelcome company, revealing your face like a well-kept secret, white and ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Elephant Keeper -- pt. 1
Thank you all for your reviews! First, I want to let you all know that this is not, not, not, not, not a sequel to The Elephant Boy. Not. Definately ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Elephant Keeper -- pt. 1
Thanks for your input! The character in the third section is Joseph as a child. I guess I'll just have to mention his name more in the other two sections, ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
minesweeping what crops are these? unwilling, slumbering goosebumps, appearing along the red wrist of the road, exposed precious rumps, packed dirt what blossoms will come from these? baby-headed lill
Aug 5, 2009 -
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the night is full of snails tread carefully – the night is full of snails hobble-backed aborrances, making their slow pilgrimage, on the shoulders of the grassblades small and emerging, ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
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the burning season wildfire in bush canyon today and the sky is doubtful with ash, fluttering like flirting eyelashes. the heat gasps in and lays low over the heavy-lapped valley, ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
ghost stories dark staircase leading downwards – an esophagus – and us on the edge, like a nightly prayer, with the moonlight hemming our nightgowns blue and a draft cupping ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
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apostasy among the tallgrass and in the fields where the forget-me-nots climb sideways, pious and succinct with bees hanging like earbobs from their blue heads, the minister composes a sermon ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Currently untitled haiku
Please do not critique works older than six months without the author's express request. -Kylan *locked*
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
seasickness meiosis of the moon; splintered on the hump-backs of the new tide – tiny petals of white light water-born, like capsizing paperboats. salt skin and a new coat of ...
Jul 18, 2009
