Kylan

Hello, Let me remember what life was once. Time and time again I've forgotten all, And yet, I remember. Life was once full of choices, a dance With a mysterious ...

SS Rose - Depressing. Depressing content and depressing due to the fact that this is yet another angtsy teenage catalogue of woes, and not something unique and fresh. Your first ...

I like this Pengu. Compared to most drug abuse related poetry, this is top tier. It was well executed enough that all I have are nitpicks to address. Moments, moments, ...

Galerius -- This was good. Your prose is fun to read. And, even more than your poetry, I find similarities between your style and Cormac McCarthy's. Again, I recommend that ...

The...grasses First of all, the term "honey sweet" is cliche and boring. Secondly you use this term more than once, and although I can see where you might have been ...

Hello At first glance, I wrote this off as another piece for the scrap pile, and it probably still is, but there's something about your closing stanza that I enjoyed ...

Jared, Good to have you back. The poem -- as I said in the Facebook note, I really, really like this. Not only because it's awfully well written, but because ...

Hello, First, I wanted to definitively contradict what RainingSunshine stated in regards to the capitalization and punctuation of poetry. Nowhere does it say that a poet must capitalize, and though ...

Heya Demsy, So I won't go into much line-by-line detail with things, seeing as Galerius already did that, but I'll give you my general thoughts. This story screams you, Demsy. ...

Gahks -- Unlike Dreamcatcher, I don't think that the word choice is a problem. On the contrary, I think you have several beautiful lines here. The problem, I think, lies ...

elkpetal -- I enjoyed this very much. I was skeptical at first, mainly because I think you started out a little shaky, but by mid-poem, I was into the groove ...

Gal -- As usual, I like this. Maybe, upon reading a second time, I liked it a little less, but you always manage to deliver poetry that inspires some nice ...

June -- This is a fantastic improvement on your usual poetry. I enjoyed it. There's still plenty of room to grow, but I can definately see your poetry maturing here. ...

Connie -- Ooh. Nice ending. I enjoyed this, but there wasn't much to it. Both in plot and writing. You and I, as has been said before, have very different ...

June-- This was a really good, solid effort. I appreciate the personal dimension and you definately have a couple great lines here. Like the opening stanza -- good stuff. One ...