Kylan

Jiggity - This is really cool. As I said in my previous critique, this entire premise would turn to slop in anybody eles's hands and it makes the story all ...

ASC NC - In the future, consider posting a more lengthy piece. With a single paragraph like this, it's hard to grasp your style and your character's personality. Avoid posting ...

Clo - Just as a disclaimer I haven't read TS Elliot's poem, so my understanding of the piece may be slightly hindered. Anyway. Fantastic. It is so rare that a ...

Conrad - Ha. I hate it when people jump into stories without having read what comes before and complain about being confused as well. :wink: Anyway. It's nice to see ...

Jiggity - As always, delightful. Your words are rich and well-chosen and it is always an entertaining experience to read a story of yours. You have the useful talent of ...

Conrad - I enjoyed this, as I usually enjoy your writing. I like how you contrasted the elegance of the masquerade party with the sarcastic irreverence of Melanie and Chloe. ...

Sohini - Despite the fact that this is a piece of rhyming poetry, which can go disasterously wrong, I though this was pretty good. You have this refreshing way of ...

Conrad - So I've made three attempts to critique this and I've been interrupted each and every time. However, this also means I've read the story three times and so ...

Jared - By far, the two entries I liked most were "Red" and "Crate", especially the latter. With these two stories you incorperated good dialogue and some delicious irony. Irony ...

Conrad - PART I Alright. I enjoyed this one quite a lot. It was smooth and rhythmical and lean and it had a science fiction vibe to it as well. ...

Conrad - I really enjoyed this collection, especially the first two stories, which were both very solid, rich urban fantasy/ghostly fairtales. "Prayer" is probably the best thing I've ever seen ...

Jiggity - Admirable job. As always, your prose is rich and thoughtful and has plenty of good images and feelings woven in. I especially liked the beginning. You were in ...

Penguin - Impressive. This was very rich, very full of atmosphere and passion and love. I enjoyed how much attention you paid to word choice and detail. Also. The end ...

Jared - As always, excellent. You're really onto something here with this piece. It's been staggeringly successful so far and I have no doubt it will continue to be successful, ...

Angel - At first I wanted to tell you to ask a mod to move this over to scripts, but after I actually read it, I discovered that it is ...