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Honor #1
Tai Po district, Hong Kong Perimeter lights shown like flickering campfires around the house, directed at it's entrances, gateways, and red-brick walls. The shadows they cast loomed; black charcoal st
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Honor #2
Spoiler! : Los Angeles, California “Five,” Booker Lee yelled, pointing the gun at the woman's head, his face stony. “You've got five seconds before your wife dies. And I swear ...
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Honor #3
“It's beautiful.” “It's money.” “Same thing, in my book. I can't believe Ming managed to pull through, though. Those Columbian bastards rarely deal with foreigners.” “The right price can
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Honor #4
Empathy was hell, he had decided. Booker had been sitting by Eva's side for the better part of five hours, clutching her hand, whispering encouragement. Every groan of agony, every ...
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Honor #5
Hamburg, Germany Cigarette smoke leaked out of the small bar - blazing with neon lights and beer conglomerates in the hazy nighttime air - as the man opened the door ...
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Honor #6
This is the longest, most pivotal chapter yet. Tell me how you like it! ________________________________________ Unanticipated, the evening rain fell in dense curtains, creating puddles in the roads,
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Honor #7
In this chapter, I introduce a new PoV character that will be helping Booker with Tsao and his airport poisoning plan. ____ New York City, New York Mark Stanley sprinted ...
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Honor #7.5
This should have been apart of #7 Booker stepped from the taxi cab and onto the motel parking lot, paid the driver, walked a little ways, leaned against the only ...
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Honor #8
Washington, D.C “You've got nerve, Stanley. A hell of a lot of nerve.” FBI director Jack Romney shook his head, tapping a Camel out of a package of cigarettes, and ...
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Coup
This is only a single scene from my novel, "Honor", and is roughly the halfway point of the story. If not everything makes sense, that's okay. It's just an excerpt. ...
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Honor #1 [rewrite]
So. I've decided to rewrite the first chapter of my novel (which has been completed, for those of you who aren't aware -- clocking in at 80,000 words) due to ...
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Honor [flashback rewrite]
This is a rewrite of the flashback scene in my novel, which can be found in Honor #3. If you're interested, tell me whether you prefered this rewrite over the ...
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Honor #4 [partial rewrite]
Rated R for a graphic pregnancy scene Okay. So this isn't all of #4. But I felt something about Eva's c-section/labor was false, so I decided to take it a ...
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Honor #4.0 [rewrite]
Booker sat in the Village Garden parking lot, listening to the engine tick like raindrops on a tin roof. Staring forward – staring at nothing, staring at everything – he ...
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Honor #4.5 [rewrite]
For the first portion of this chapter, refer to this link. Roaring, Booker ripped his hand away from the second officer and sank his elbow into the gut of the ...
