KylaGreenhut

I really liked your story. It was very exciting and entertaining to read. I wonder if you could go over some of your spelling and grammar mistakes and fix them ...

I really like your story. It had a lot of really good historical content and was very fun to read. I like how you added the historical content into the ...

I really like how descriptive you were about when she was stealing the bread. I am wondering if you could say what illness the old man had. I am also ...

. I really like your story it has a lot of historical content and is very descriptive. I do wonder if you could have a little bit more show not ...