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Re: Aelita
This was amazing! Just as a side note, love the last sentence. :) I liked the reoccurring theme of cobwebs that was obvious but not redundant. The only thing I ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: The Birds Flee
Kya here for a review! Hmm, it's interesting, albeit a bit short. ( ;) ) I think I get a good picture of what is happening, even with the length. ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of a New Day.
Kya to review this lovely rendition of the story! I personally love this story from the Bible. :) You did a great job with this, and I can tell you ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Fear
Excellent job! Yes, it is definitely poetry. It's all very true and relatable as well. Here's my favorite part, because I've felt like this so many times. You take the ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: What's Beautiful In This World
Kya with a review That was good, albeit a bit depressing. You've done a great job on conveying feeling. I like the literary devices you chose to use. It was ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: The Majesty of the Sea (Petrarchan Sonnet form)
Kya with a review That's amazing! The literary devices you use are wonderful! It gives a completely different view on something many are familiar with, but is still easily recognized. ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: From Tokyo to Jakarta
Kya with a review That's really amazing and powerful. It's also a bit sad. It was a bit hard to read because of the foreign accents, but they did give ...
Feb 7, 2014 -
Re: Worthless
Kya here for a review That's quite powerful. I like how you start with the same type of phrase often. It is a bit depressing, but I like how you ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Family
Hi, here for a review again! Wow. That's amazing. I can't answer all those questions for others, but it did make me think about how my family interacts (which I ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Broken Hearted
Hello, Ana with a review! I love this poem. It describes the feelings that I think many teens and young adults have, both about moving and losing a special someone. ...
Feb 6, 2014
