Kwantack

Awww! You don't see a lot of this poetry, making this quite unique. I love how the format changes a little every once in a while, giving it it's own ...

Saddening! I actually made the puppy-dog face with this one. It's very constructive and well explained, the setting and all. Fantastic poetry.

I love its rhythm. And like others have said, some cleaning up in punctuation/grammar would certainly give it a nice polish, for lack of a better word. Perhaps not a ...