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  • Catch a Falling Star

    Please critique it to shreds! I'm just starting poetry and really want to improve.Can you catch a falling star in your hand?Can your thin fingers keep a hold of the ...

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  • Rosebud

    Another poem. I'm not sure if I even like this one. It just jumped into my head one was a little budding rose,growing in the morning’s dew,fragrant petals curled in ...

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  • Don't Drown My Heart

    A short sonnet we had to write for English, please citique!

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The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster