Kresle

Thanks for the review! :) The punctuation and capitalization was a last-minute touch before posting here, haha. But again, thanks!

Thank you for your review! I'll be honest with you, those lines were the ones I had the most trouble with! Urgh. Up to now, I still can't think of ...

Thank you for the review and suggestions!

Thank you! Welcome to the YWS by the way! I'm pretty new myself though, hahaha!