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  • Article / Essay » Review, Culture Re: The Interesting Reading Experience of Kikomachine Komix (draft)

    This review will be pretty brief. I am quite familiar with Kikomachine Komix, but not to the point that I know and have read all his compilations and comic strips. ...

    Jun 23, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Atlas ch1

    I suggest going more into detail about the spells she's memorizing. Talk about how and why it's boring for her. Does it take multiple tries to get a spell right? ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: KIA - Episode 2 (Tragedy of Mrs. Evans)

    This episode was noticeably shorter than the last episode. I get that you wrote this along with the 1st but I have some stuff to comment on for this one. ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Script » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: KIA - Episode 1 (Now Rises KIA)

    For each "episode," I suggest writing out the all appearing characters at the beginning. I also think you should give out short summaries of the characters so that people would ...

    May 13, 2018


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