Krazyskooter

I agree with shadowbox, My own sentence structure is terrible so I tend to over look that, but my biggest problem when I read something is having the characters name ...

Alot has been said that I can't really add to, other than the fact that you use Isadora's name an awful lot, here are just a couple examples. “Can I ...

Yeah, the blank canvas thing sounds like the guy missed his deadline, I don't think many people could show up to work and be considered great for not actually doing ...