Kota

I really like the way people critiqued my poem. Thank you and if I have any mistakes i will promise to work on them. XD Thanks alot.

Hello there, Kota. I'll be your reviewer today. =D Okay, this is nice. Short, somewhat simple, but good. There is only really one thing that bothers me, and that is ...

I'll jump right into this. This poem was as powerful as it was simple. In the few lines you wrote you said quite a mouthful. you put new meaning to ...

Alright, Mandorelute, she's a young woman, and you're REALLY going to give her that huge of a critique? Seriously? Calm down. Not everybody can be writing geniuses like you. I ...

Alright, Mandorelute, she's a young woman, and you're REALLY going to give her that huge of a critique? Seriously? Calm down. Not everybody can be writing geniuses like you. I ...

Hey there. :) Anyway, I think this is too weighed down by your rhyme scheme. A poem doesn't really need a rhyme to be a poem, it just needs a ...

I would love to answer questions now. but i gtg.

i like your poem although, it is a little gross. -Kota-