Kobain72

I did like it, but I thought it got very abstract towards the end (as other reviewers have said). I'm not sure what you're trying to say in that last ...

Good poem. I'm not sure whether I can add anything that anyone else here hasn't already said so I won't try. I like the shape poem idea you used and ...

i hope you can continue this story. I've only recently got into Metal Gear Solid but now i'm a huge fan. The ending of the fourth game was kind of ...

Wow. Immediately I wanted to read the whole thing. I really liked how you built up tension through-out until those last five, shocking words. Gripping stuff. I think the few ...