Knusperig

Not bad for your first short story. I liked the idea and the ending was nice, but I agree with the first two reviewers; More description would really add to ...

The imagery in this piece is amazing. I can see everything. "Huge, silhouetted trees form a lacy skyline around me..." I've never thought of tree tops against the sky as ...

What do you do when you're walking alone? And the only thing beside you is your shadow. When you wish someone out there would find you. These lines reminded me ...

This wasn't too bad, but it could use some improvement. I didn't actually read the whole thing and I apologize for that. It's late and I found your writing style ...