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Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter Two
I kind of wanted her to bite him, but then I just figured that she couldn't breathe and was just focusing on the fact that she needed oxygen. I'm hoping ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter One
Thanks so much for your review! Kitty is my favorite X-Men character, and while at first I enjoyed her story I soon found myself hating the direction that the cannon ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Before the Mast: Chapters one and two
Most sixteen year olds do use the f-word (hell, I use it a lot), but YWS policy is to rate a work with any usage dictates automatic 18 no matter ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
I am really proud of my mom. She took a horrible situation and turned it into something good.
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
The reason that I feel so strongly about abortion, and anyone is free to comment on this, is that my mother was a teenager when she got pregnant with me. ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
I am not going to take this down, because I want to look at it and the comments and be reminded of my mistakes. I can honestly say that I ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
I have realized the mistakes I made through posting this without editing. Looking back, I am somewhat disgusted with myself, and I should be. But in the end, I think ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
And as for your stance on gay marriage, I have to say that I disagree. I would also like to note that this work has nothing to do with gay ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
Like I said, I only had fifteen minutes and I have to admit was a little frustrated because of that. I took out my personal issues on this paper without ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
But it is not our place to decide what law is. That is up to the government. We also really need to consider the mothers in this, something that I ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
Thanks bugs.
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
Thank you.
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
Thanks spark. I am going to re-write it, but I have to say that I will not take religion out of the essay. Maybe it makes my argument weak, but ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
I took the ACT. I'm not sure if I have to take the SAT. And trust me, I will be chewing on that candy all week while I overhaul this. ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Abortion
I know that I should have probably refined it. I know that I didn't do a very good job. It was more me choosing a subject that I really shouldn't ...
Jan 28, 2014
