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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Broken.

    Glad I can't envy them that. Take out that? Someone from court. She had nice perfume. It smelled like wine and roses. I don't remember much of what she said. ...

    May 6, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Vashoa's Life

    I agree that you use "She" far too much when you start sentences. So instead of using she you can flip sentences around like here: She sighed, wishing there was ...

    May 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Umbrellas and Stars

    I loved this. One of those where I was so transfixed I wanted to read through it a few times to let it soak in. I really like the imagery, ...

    May 4, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Sewn Shut

    “Man loses in a moment the memory of the things that have made him suffer.” - Adolf Hitler (Hitler’s Table Talk 1941-1944) The Holocaust started with one man and ended ...

    Apr 29, 2008


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