KittyBee

Thank you for the long review! I appreciate it when people take the time to actually go over important details rather than just slathering me with mindless compliments or insults. ...

Oh the boiling anxiety that's raging through my blood as I post this. Please don't be too rough, guys. x///x

Haha, I'm happy you liked it. I try to make flow a big part of my writing.

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the read.

Thank you for reviewing-- I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reviewing~ I already fixed the typos, as they were previously pointed out, but thank you for noting, anyway. Congrats on your 100th review!

Thank you for the detailed review! I corrected the typos I felt necessary. The other parts you pointed out are from the exaggerated lingo differentiating the narrator from "she", so ...

Thanks, actually did mean "screaming"-- it was just a typo. I corrected it though. Thank you for pointing it out :)

Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Much thanks!

Thank you very much! I corrected the "oozing" error ;).