Kirahh

Oh my goodness I love that! One thing; In this line ------>"...A game in which he never surrenders, no matter what I say or do." I kind of got confused ...

I can hear the rustling sound the leaves made when the wind kissed them gently. I can smell blood flowing with the midnight breeze. I stood, breathing in the cold ...

You're a really talented writer. One thing I'd like to recommend. Maybe you should try using semicolons instead of colons. Other than that, I liked the way you described things. ...