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  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: A day at school

    You have a very natural and flexible way of making your narration and dialogue sound real. The conversations among the various characters are genuine, thus giving the story a sense ...

    Jul 20, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Fourth (Chapter 1.1)

    I love dystopian stories and this didn't disappoint, The captivating narrative to the story flow, character development, and pacing are good. Also, it would help if you expanded on Alex's ...

    Oct 5, 2023


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