Kippy

Heh heh, thanks. I think I'll work on that and I can sort of see what you mean. Description is something I over-work in poems and totally ignore in stories! ...

Thanks! My spelling is pretty awful, not helped by the fact that I type so fast... and I don't really like these anyway. My big bad is the rhymth I ...

No, I think that makes a lot of sense actually and I'd agree that it's one of my main problems. Wow, this site is cool, the ones Im used to, ...

I've written nine chapters, all about as short as these two, but i have only got as far as typing up two on to my computer. This is the second... ...