Kingofnate

Thanks! And no, this story is not real, it's supernatural. Welcome to YWS

Yay

Heyheyhey. I'm really sorry, I was kidding about that. I know its hard to tell when people are kidding over comments and stuff. And at times my sense of humor ...

Says the one who writes about young children waking up at 7:15. I am not sure I can imagine a life more horrible for just a young girl.

Made your account today, huh? Welcome, hope you like it.

If you strive to disgust people through your writing, then it's a compliment in the form of a comment.

Accomplished* :/

7:15 for an elementary schooler? That's a bit harsh. If you were looking to do a dramatic and screwed up piece, then mission accomplishes. I don't know if I appreciate ...

forgot to mention, cool picture

Thanks, excellent review. I kind of want to review your review but that would be inceptious. You said the happy and up beat doesn't fit, but that was what I ...

It does help, of course. I will definitely expand on the curse, the only reason I haven't done so is, like you said, don't really know where i am going ...

I is ungood at grammer's. So thanks for the revision on that. Although I think I'll keep the, " ... track the bear, spy on the bear, wrestle the bear ...

Ha