Kim

Thank you for commenting, i will go back and make some changes. kim

short and to the point. i really enjoyed reading this. you hit the subject right on. Great job. kim

wow, thank you for taking so much time and critiquing this, you have no idea how much i appreciate this. this is my first time writing a story. and this ...

you definately hit the mark with this one. Short but to the point. I cant find any mistakes, i really like this. kim

This is great, i can tell you love to ride. Your discriptions are very good. I would suggest that you put puncuation in your poem. Poems work the same as ...

lets try this again. lol. this is very good. it is a lot better with the changes made. although it was very good to begin with. kim

i like this, i also cant wait for the rest. good job. kim

thanks bear, the belts are no longer worn to hold our jeans up, they are now worn around the outside of the shirts. lol. and i agree on the sea ...

thanks for the advice. i will go through and read it again, i just thought using one word was getting boring. lol. so i tried to change it up. i ...

thanks, i will go back and edit. i appreciate it.

OMG, that was so awesome, wow. the way you discribe the emotions is so good. this story rocks. it just keeps getting better and better. when you talk i can ...

this is really good, and getting interesting, not much to critique on, scotty pretty much touched on it all. so got the pleasure of just reading. this is great. kim

all i can say, is this is awesome. i have never read anything about love as you have put it. i give an AAAAAA++++++ kim

LMAO, i agree with everyone, but this poem is so funny, it had me laughing. makes me never want to grow up and grow old. lol no negative comment from ...

I really liked this, it was really easy to read and the ending was great. great job. kim