Kikuyo

I like this a lot, and I'm very picky about science fiction. One thing I do have to say in particular is that with it being written in first person, ...

Any critique is welcome. The sun lowered in the sky, an array of colours meshed and it was breathtaking. The beaches were most definitely the best thing about La Pare. ...

I like this, especially the last line. But, this doesn't quite strike me as a poem. I'm sure you could add to it ^-^, elaborating more on these disaterous effects, ...

Lovely poem! Here's my input: Thank you summer. Thank god for summer, : God is usually capitalized. Is the lower case for effect? Balmy beauty makes me feel so fine ...