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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Perfect paper people

    Hi LordGreenLeaf! I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing something so personal. I always find that writing from personal experience and problems creates the best writing because you ...

    Thu Jul 31, 2014 3:37 pm
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: What's wrong with Life?

    Hi DreamWork! I think that you had a very good concept, but I do have a couple suggestions. I agree with Autumns that in the second line you should choose ...

    Thu Jul 31, 2014 3:25 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sky

    I thought your poem had a really great concept. It was very creative and I've never had the pleasure of reading anything quite like it. You were able to create ...

    Thu Jul 31, 2014 3:11 pm


All my life I've wanted to be someone; I guess I should have been more specific.
— Jane Wagner