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Re: Perfect paper people
Hi LordGreenLeaf! I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing something so personal. I always find that writing from personal experience and problems creates the best writing because you ...
Thu Jul 31, 2014 3:37 pm -
Re: What's wrong with Life?
Hi DreamWork! I think that you had a very good concept, but I do have a couple suggestions. I agree with Autumns that in the second line you should choose ...
Thu Jul 31, 2014 3:25 pm -
Re: Sky
I thought your poem had a really great concept. It was very creative and I've never had the pleasure of reading anything quite like it. You were able to create ...
Thu Jul 31, 2014 3:11 pm
