Kiki

I am a fan as well. You use a lot of the same words over and over again. I recommend getting a good thesaurus. For instance, in describing the uncle's ...

hahaha omg i love Pink and Kiki!!! Ha!! I was cracking up when Pink beat Sophie up!!! I could totally picture that in my head! Very nice job! I liked ...

I really like this =D Dreams are so nice to write about :D Good job hun

Too much about Danni? Maybe...I might change that a bit. A) Kiki's a princess, so what? Ever since I started her back when i was 12, mind you, she's always ...

Brutal! It's awesome! so much better than I could do ! I like it :D

Thanks Meadow!! :D I sometimes type past instead of passed, I dunno why but it happens and Word doesnt catch it foe me D= Thanks so much for your input!!

Thanks Tex! I really appreciate your help! Pink is only a "talker" to Kimiko, you actually find this out in the next chapter...I think..If i remember right?? She's shy around ...

Heyy! Nice story! One thing that I'm curious about is what did Lady Komiko look like? And could you see any features of Pink that wasnt dirty or bloody? Well ...

Wow Thanks Tex!! I didnt even realize that I had Danni say ""Lady Kimiko" that many times!!! xDDD The things I dont notice...

Thanks hun! =D