-
Re: test
Hi, Ki1roy here with a quick review! I just want to say I absolutely love the title! so simple but gives you every thing you needed to know about the ...
Feb 11, 2024 -
Re: Moving on
Hi, Kilroy here, I'm here with a quick review. I think that the story could use more riming, it is a poem after all. the riming would also make it ...
Aug 20, 2023 -
Re: She Lives Inside Me
Hi, Kilroy here. I really like this story; you did an incredible job on it! I honestly did not see the 'she is me' twist it had to it. although ...
Aug 9, 2023 -
Re: Reclaimed from the Sea's Embrace
hi, Kilroy here, I think the poem was good, but the pacing between the stars telling her "Keep searching, dear one, you'll find your key." and her finding the 'love ...
Aug 2, 2023
