Kevikur

Thank you for such a wonderful review! I'm glad you connected so much to Chase :) Perhaps you'll see more of Chase in the future.

It's the way you put together your sentences. And when I was 12, I had horrible grammar, so compared to me yours is excellent.

I understand what you're saying about the dialogue and I'll make sure that I don't make it as confusing in the future. I did do a lot of research on ...

Thank you for another wonderful review! I really appreciate it!

Ah, thank you for pointing out that typo! I had changed it but apparently it likes giving me trouble. I'm sure I got the right spelling this time. And I'm ...

Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoy this kind of genre of writing :) There will be more like this to come

Thank you and I'll certainly keep that in mind (-:

And I forgot to mention that there were clues throughout the story that tied back to the narrator saying why he did what he did. For example, he ate his ...

Thank you so much for the review! You're completely right about me showing and not telling; I'll improve on that. Insatiable also means unquenchable-- so in context, he has an ...

Thank you very much (:

Thank you for the review and point out that little typo! The narrator had said he wasn't guilty because he knew the consequences of his actions. He most likely had ...

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I'll keep you posted if and when I write another necrophilia story (;

Thank you tremendously for your review! I can't express how much your words mean to me.

I was wondering what people who didn't know what necrophilia was would think of it haha! A creeped out audience means I've done my job and completed my goal. Thank ...

Thank you for another comment! You're too sweet