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Re: Left Incomplete
Hi! I felt that this was good as a first chapter; you introduced characters (though we don't know the narrator's name yet), a setting, and even a bit of a ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Charity's Views (Temp. Title)
Hello! So this is half of the story? Or just half the first chapter? All the same, it was good, but there are a few things I would fix. Something ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Long Shot {1}
Yeah, this really made me want to read on. You said it's really rough, but I think it's very good already. There wasn't much that I'd change but there were ...
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: Dustland Fairytale pt. 1 (renamed)
This is my first time reviewing something so I hope I can be some help >_
Aug 10, 2009