Keowyn

I liked this. I didn't see anything, and it flows really well. The stanzas aren't too long or short, and it has RYTHYM. I liked the idea it portrays: To ...

this was really good. It grabbed my attetion, and as it's a rough draft there are some grammatical errors. I found two things that you need to work on. 1: ...

whoa. i'm speechless. seriously. ok, but i did find one or two things. scratch that, two. first off: He had reached the top of the tower, started as he opened ...

I guess I'm a bit late, but in your first part this is what I saw: . Towards the southern end of the forest was a massive lake, the East ...

wow. this was completely awesome. It's full of potential, and like dynasty cow i got lost in this hopelessly. Keep it up. Oh yeah, at the end of chapter 2 ...

I have to admit I too loved the vocabulary on this- I can see the image as well- i shall need to find a song for those words, to listen ...