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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Stash - Chapter 1

    I genuinely enjoyed this! It's weird, but I love stories that involve drugs. You're writing is fantastic! The only thing I have to say is that in some places you ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Health Re: A Dream of All Dreams

    This is amazing. I also thought that at the beginning the character was simply waking up from a terrible nightmare. This out of body experience is different than any other ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Fourth of July

    This is absolutely perfect. People often forget what the Fourth of July is truly about. People are to excited about getting drunk or having a long weekend with food and ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Does It Hurt?

    This is quite interesting. I want to know more. What is going on here and so forth? But in this short story you have captivated me. The ending is perfect. ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Mistake

    This story was perfect. It did have an emotional effect on me. While I wasn't going to cry, I still felt sad inside for the two girls. I want to ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Sarah

    This is a very interesting read. The first paragraph needs reworked, and the ending is a bit confusing, but other than that it was great! It was a simple, short ...

    Jul 6, 2014


As if you were on fire from within. The moon lives in the lining of your skin.
— Pablo Neruda