Kelsi222

Thanks, I think it is a lot better from my first draft also.

Hey again people!! This is the edited version of my speech. Please READ AND REVIEW!!!!! Thanks!!!! Kelsi =) "Massacre at Columbine", "Terror at Tech". Good morning teachers and fellow students. ...

Hey! This was a good start, though I didnt get much out of it. I'm sure the next will be better!! But it was a great start!!!! Kelsi =)

Hey!! I'm not a very big Harry Potter fan, but this made me a slight bite interseted!!! It was well written out and had good grammer and spelling!!! I enjoyed ...

Hey. Thank-you so much for the great editing! It sounds a lot better now and you did a awesome job at it!! Thanks!!!! Kelsi =)

Thanks scotty.knows. I am sorry about the spelling and grammar, I forgot to run through spell check. And thanks for agreeing with the "Good Morning", I will lose marks for ...

Thanks, you did have some helpful tip, but most of it I already know. And with the whole point thing. THERE DOES NOT HAVE TO BE A POINT. You no ...

Hey, I just like to answers some of the questions and clear a few things up. 1) At the moment there really isn't a point to the speech, our school's ...

Okay I'm not trying to sound rude or un-apprichated but if you read my top message when i first posted to speech you will see that it said THE SPEECH ...

Hey!! Your avdise from the both of you is really great!! Sorry about not running it through spell check, I'll remeber for next time! First off it's not a perssauive ...

Thanks! This is just a rough draft that should of never been posted to begin with. The better copy will be better!! And the think with Chole and Charlies names ...

I apoloigize for sounding appreactive. I didn't mean to sound that say. But I thought it was pretty noticable that it wasnt finished and I cuond not post the entry ...

First off the stroy is not even done yet. There will be a lot more drama then that little bit. And about the song, I said in the story the ...

Hey there. I just wanted to say your outline was really good, a lot better then mine, keep yp the good work!!