Kelpies

Welcome!

I just found out that this is in the LITERARY SPOTLIGHT!

No actually, it just posted it twice! It's really annoying when stuff like that happens!

Thanks! I will get right on the errors.

Thanks! Just so you know, I removed the whole talking sharks part because it wasn't the impression I wanted to give.

I understand.

I like it! It's like what I used to write. I only have a couple nitpicks, so please bear with me. Minor capitalization error: "I wish I could...i don't know." ...

Nice!

GLITCH PUBLISHED IT BEFORE IT WAS DONE!!!!!! PLEASE DO NOT READ!!!!!!!!!!!! I will tell you when It is otherwise.

"I" am Cairnes in the book. But I have a different name in each world, you will get it more when the first chapter is out. Here is a hint ...

True....

And you probably wouldn't have thought so before I edited it. Seriously, there were talking sharks, I even hated writing it. But thanks all the same!

Thanks!

Thanks.

You're right though, corrected that.