Keisha-Ann

Whoa, of course it's not poo or crap or any other form of bad at all! In my own opinion, I adore it! Is there more? If not, are you ...

OK, once again, it was good. I think you can be better. Here is what I saw. She's love to play soccer. I think you meant 'She loves'. Saying 'She's ...

As far as I can tell, everything has been pointed out to you I believe. You could go through and edit some more things that have been pointed out to ...

I liked it very much because it gave me an image that popped up in my head^_^. -dances- I love the title. I expected more though because of what I ...

I really liked this poem, really liked it. The rhyming scheme flowed very well and created a nice rhythm. I saw some alliteration also ("do dim to dorm")! I always ...

I really liked this poem! I got a great meaning from it. I noticed a few errors but the others have already pointed them out^^. Just wanted you to know ...

First of all I liked this peice and that is because of the meaning that I got from it. I didn't get that big of an impact from the meaning ...