Kbug1997

Trust me, this would a good song!

Hello First off, good poem. It captures everyday life quite nicely and your word choice is great for the meaning you want to convey. It paints a picture in the ...

Hello! Ugh I love this poem! The reader is drawn in to this mysterious, creepy, world full of twists and turns. You use so much descriptive words and it really ...

I think the regrouping you did was wonderful! The flow really dose open up even more now! Still one of my favorites! -M.