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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 11.2: Ilami

    I'm in the middle of playing a j-rpg game, and I remembered how fun long-form fantasy stories are. I hope your novel can satisfy that cravinggg

    Fri Dec 08, 2017 11:47 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 11.2: Ilami

    oh wait, you're making a novel out of the short story I reviewed before? that's pretty dope, maybe I'll give it a read some time

    Wed Dec 06, 2017 12:31 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: The Kira Kira Poetry Club Collection #1

    ayyyy That's damn cool. Maybe you'd like to leave a review? Two of the writers are fresh and inexperienced poets (I'm talking about Destroy_Me_Hard and Himawarin*), so the club would ...

    Tue Dec 05, 2017 10:45 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: The Kira Kira Poetry Club Collection #1

    A note from Himawarin* Hi! Welcome to the Kira Kira Poetry Club! Writing dark poems and getting in touch with our own brokennesses is the premise of the entire club, ...

    Sun Dec 03, 2017 1:41 pm
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Politics Re: The Roots and The Fruits of Fake News

    Hi MJ. I haven't tasted cranberries, ever, but I'm sure they taste berry nice. I have tasted sweet potatoes, though, and they're noice. The part where you said it kind ...

    Sun Nov 26, 2017 1:17 pm
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Politics Re: The Roots and The Fruits of Fake News

    I did this for a class, but I wanted to take this out of there. Thanks for the advice on the making this less drab part. Unfortunately, I don't have ...

    Sun Nov 26, 2017 4:39 am
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Cursed Maiden

    Ayy, thanks very much for your dissents. I appreciate it, and I've been thinking about it all day. I've got a lot to say, but time is of essence right ...

    Tue Jun 20, 2017 1:27 pm
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: Thoughts On Relationships That Emerged After Selling a Fidget Spinner

    Do you mean you want to see a fidget spinner destroyed? If you do, then my friends and I are planning to do so this year :^)

    Sun Jun 11, 2017 4:26 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Perfect Match

    Ah, I get now why they gotta be gay. Thank you very much for clearing that up. I'm not that familiar of tennis or sports in general, so I couldn't ...

    Thu Jun 01, 2017 9:17 am
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: A sweet little story!

    Here's how I interpreted it. In the moments we see Natalie before her meeting with Ben, nothing out of the unusual happens. She hangs out in the park, which is ...

    Tue May 23, 2017 4:04 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito

    Well, that's one way to make them know that this is inspired by real life or coming from the heart. But it can be unhealthy if you overdo it. Too ...

    Wed May 17, 2017 2:07 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito

    Well, that's one way to make them know that this is inspired by real life or coming from the heart. But it can be unhealthy if you overdo it. Too ...

    Wed May 17, 2017 2:07 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito

    Well, that's one way to make them know that this is inspired by real life or coming from the heart. But it can be unhealthy if you overdo it. Too ...

    Wed May 17, 2017 2:07 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito

    It's not that clear from the beginning that these are your actual feelings and that you were referring to actual people. You know, since this is fiction, the readers would ...

    Tue May 16, 2017 10:13 am
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Catharsis

    Ayy, thanks for the review! Sorry for the late reply though. You don't choose the barrio life. The barrio life chooses you. It just happened to choose me when you ...

    Sun May 14, 2017 3:41 pm


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead