Kaylyn

Thanks for all the help, its now been re-edited. I hope you like the new version. -kaylyn

I really need some critique. Please help me out. thanks.

Thanks for all the critique. It helps my book out alot.

It looks great so far. I like reading short chapters because it is easy to critique. It looks like you have taken care of the grammar mistakes. Great job, and ...

Thanks for all the critism, it has really helped my writing. I am off to write the 6th section of half-blood.

I have edited it and added some parts into it. Hope you all like it! Thanks for the critique, the only way for it to get better is if you ...

Ok, I will definately edit it!

OKay I am not going to go over and repeat what others have said about the critiques there were some mistakes but I really liked it. Keep up with the ...

Thanks for all the help, I edited it now so hopefully it looks better.

Thanks for your critiques, it really helps my books. My enjoy reading the writers feedback and it lets me know what people are looking for. I have edited it, and ...

Thanks for all the critique guys, it really improves my books. I have added up to chapter 5 so far and I hope you read it and enjoy it.

It is looking even better. Though I think you should take out the last sentance, it just doesn't sound right. I didn't find any grammar mistakes this time. You did ...

Thanks for the critique it was really helpful. I just edited it.

THanks guys for the help. This is my first attempt at writing a book so I need the critique. Rest assured this book will be NOTHING LIKE TWILIGHT(I loved the ...

Thanks guys for all of ya'lls help. Hopefully the book is a lot better and I hope you like it. Be assured this will be nothing like Twilight or any ...