Kaylyn

First off, I was a little confused at who was speaking in the dialogue. Could you specify? Another is why would some strange random guy be led in my a ...

Now my father was dead, his blood stained body lying just feet away and this was all I had left to hang on to. The thing that had just taken ...

I really love your story, and I hope to see more of it. I think that the paper crown at such a big event is a nice touch. I also ...