Kaylaxxx1

[quote="Wolfdaemon"] "yeah, i think i will, thanks." [/quote You need to put your capitals in, and after each speech it is a comma not a full stop. other than those ...

You are a very talented writer, your characters are vivid and your story line is not vapid. Although, this piece of writing to me is more unoriginal than others. you ...

Hmm, well I am so sorry if I am mean to you but. This story sort of hops right to the point, you need to hook the reader in more. ...

Without you, i have no day An I by itself must always be capitalized, your poetry has a certain rhythm to me it is not all about the rhymes and ...

Okay, so I just woke up so if I am mean I am so sorry. First of all, when doing poetry the first letter of each line must be capitalized. ...

"Aw, did Fawwah wose her v-card at church camp?" Clearly mocking me, Alex entered the scene with a sex joke. How predictable could guys get nowadays? "Apparently she didn't tell ...

Chapter 4 Darkness envelopes me, it pulls me under its wicked cape. A sweet feeling of floating then I awake, my mind is blurred, and it feels like I’ve slept ...